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Elite Mentoring Program – $1950

Nevada Grey

ScriptCoach’s Nevada Grey, who received her MA in Screenwriting from USC, is an award-winning and produced screenwriter. Her film “How to Get Rid of a Body” is being released this year, and she’s optioned several other works, including “MacArthur Park,” “Cash” & “The Ex-Change.”

Nevada is also the Director of Development for DKZ Films (“The Fourth Noble Truth,” “Strictly Sexual”) & has been a script analyst for over 8 years, during which time she’s helped hundreds of writers improve their craft. Nevada’s coaching is inspiring, nurturing, insightful & fun. Alongside ScriptCoach head David Kohner Zuckerman, she will always do her best to help you turn your vision into a reality.

Great markup! I found all of your points very insightful – incredibly helpful! Again, thank you so much for your input and guidance. In addition to your insightfulness, I greatly appreciate your positive approach to all of this, in terms of how best to improve things – lots of great recommendations/solutions.
David E.

David Kohner Zuckerman

David Kohner Zuckerman, the President of ScriptCoach & founder of VPF, is a Hollywood Producer whose credits include “A Perfect Christmas,” “The Fourth Noble Truth,” “Strictly Sexual,” “All I Want for Christmas,” “Chump Change” & “Caught in the Act.” Before starting DKZ Films, David ran Development for Silver Lion Films, where he worked on “Man on Fire” & “Crocodile Dundee in L.A.”

David, also a licensed psychotherapist, is a terrific teacher who truly enjoys working with his clients. He’s known as one of the best development people in the Biz, and has a supportive approach that consistently works with scribes of all levels.

I appreciate you really delving into this screenplay in order to provide clear direction…Thank you for being very clear (and kind) about your reaction…
Stanley Idema

The Program

Looking to land an agent or sell your script? Our NEW, 3-month Elite Mentoring package is designed to help you with both. This is a proven program developed by Hollywood producer & VPF founder David Kohner Zuckerman and produced screenwriter Nevada Grey. It’s designed specifically for writers interested in making a career investment that is bound to pay off. As such, we provide personal guidance, screenwriting support & leads to both production companies & top reps.

Program Structure

Phase 1:

  • You will be provided 7-10 pages of detailed notes on your script from David & Nevada.
  • You will have an hour long telephone consultation with Nevada to support Phase 2.

Phase 2:

  • You will write a new outline for your first rewrite, based on your consult. OR, if your script is solid enough, you will move on to Phase 3.
  • You will have a second telephone consultation with Nevada to discuss your new outline, and to prepare you for your rewrite.

Phase 3:

  • You will receive detailed annotations on your rewrite from David & Nevada.
  • You will be provided a final telephone consultation to ensure your script is market-ready.
  • You will be given a professionally written logline, query letter & 25 FREE PITCHES on VPF.

Once you purchase, please email your script to david@scriptcoach.com. Don’t miss out – spots will go fast!






Comprehensive Analysis + 10 Pitches – $299

The most common screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Indeed, when it comes to selling your project, you must have a professionally written, compelling script. But that’s not all. You also need ACCESS to Hollywood Pros – which is exactly why David devised this service – as it provides you with a comprehensive script analysis & 10 FREE PITCHES on Virtual Pitch Fest. David’s notes will be thorough & cover all aspects of your screenplay, including story/plot, characters, structure, dialogue, tone & marketability. You’ll also be given specific suggestions for improvement & answers to what David calls “The ScriptCoach Seven.” Additionally, you’ll be provided with a ScriptCoach Scorecard, which grades your script from top to bottom. Once you’ve purchased this package, please email your script whenever it’s ready to david@scriptcoach.com. To receive your 10 FREE PITCHES, simply subscribe for free on VPF & they will be sent right away!

Turnaround time: 5-7 days





Query Letter – $129

To get Hollywood Pros to read your script, you must first have a great query letter. David & his team have had years of proven experience creating professional query letters that are both compelling & persuasive. This is a terrific opportunity to have your script broken down clearly & concisely so that VIPs will request your material. Once you’ve purchased this service, please email your script in Final Draft or PDF to david@scriptcoach.com.

Turnaround time: 5-7 days


Comprehensive Analysis – $259

The #1 most common screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Indeed, when it comes to selling your project, you must have a professionally written & compelling screenplay. And this popular service will get you there – as it provides you with comprehensive notes covering all aspects of your screenplay – including story/plot, characters, structure, dialogue, tone & marketability. You’ll also be given specific suggestions for the next draft & answers to what David calls “The ScriptCoach Seven.” Additionally, you’ll receive a ScriptCoach Scorecard, which grades your script from top to bottom. Once you’ve purchased this package, please email your script whenever it’s ready to david@scriptcoach.com.

Turnaround time: 5-7 days