All Services2017-08-27T11:33:13-07:00

Mentoring Program – $1999

The Program

David’s Mentoring Program is designed to take writers from first draft to final draft in 5 months. You can begin the process with a script you’ve written, or an outline. During your time with David, he will provide on-going analysis, screenwriting support & pitch guidance.

Phase 1:

  • You will be provided 7-10 pages of detailed notes on your script or outline.
  • You will have a telephone consultation with David to go over the notes.
  • You & David will agree on a plan for the next draft.

Phase 2:

  • You will write a new draft based on David’s notes and consult.
  • You will have a second telephone consultation with David to go over the new draft.
  • You and David will repeat this process until the script is ready for market.

Phase 3:

  • You will be given a professionally query letter.
  • David will provide leads on companies to pitch.
  • You will be given 50 FREE PITCHES on VPF.

Once you purchase, please email your script to [email protected].





Script Analysis – $299

The most common screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Indeed, when it comes to selling your project, you must have a professionally written, compelling script. But that’s not all. You also need ACCESS to Hollywood Pros – which is exactly why David devised this service – as it provides you with a comprehensive script analysis & 10 FREE PITCHES on Virtual Pitch Fest. David’s notes will be thorough & cover all aspects of your screenplay, including story/plot, characters, structure, dialogue, tone & marketability. You’ll also be given specific suggestions for improvement & answers to what David calls “The ScriptCoach Seven.” Additionally, you’ll be provided with a ScriptCoach Scorecard, which grades your script from top to bottom. Once you’ve purchased this package, please email your script whenever it’s ready to [email protected]. To receive your 10 FREE PITCHES, simply subscribe for free on VPF & they will be sent right away!

Turnaround time: 5-7 days





Query Letter – $199

To get Hollywood Pros to read your script, you must first have a great query letter. David & his team have had years of proven experience creating professional query letters that are both compelling & persuasive. This is a terrific opportunity to have your script broken down clearly & concisely so that VIPs will request your material. Once you’ve purchased this service, please email your script in Final Draft or PDF to [email protected].

Turnaround time: 5-7 days