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Elite Mentoring Program: $1299 · $1899 · $2499

David Kohner Zuckerman

David Kohner Zuckerman, the President of ScriptCoach & founder of VPF, is a Hollywood Producer whose credits include “A Perfect Christmas,” “The Fourth Noble Truth,” “Strictly Sexual,” & “All I Want for Christmas.” Before starting DKZ Films, David ran Development for Silver Lion Films, where he worked on “Man on Fire” & “Crocodile Dundee in L.A.”

David, also a licensed psychotherapist, is a terrific teacher who truly enjoys working with his clients. He’s known as one of the best development people in the Biz, and has a supportive approach that consistently works with scribes of all levels.

The Programs

Looking to land an agent or sell your script? Our NEW, 3-month Elite Mentoring package is designed to help you with both. This is a proven program developed by Hollywood producer & VPF founder David Kohner Zuckerman. It’s designed specifically for writers interested in making a career investment that is bound to pay off. As such, we provide personal guidance, screenwriting support & leads to both production companies & top reps.

Program Structure

Phase 1:

  • You will be provided 7-10 pages of detailed notes on your script from David.
  • You will have an hour long telephone consultation with David to support Phase 2.

Phase 2:

  • You will write a new outline for your first rewrite, based on your consult. OR, if your script is solid enough, you will move on to Phase 3.
  • You will have a second telephone consultation with David to discuss your new outline, and to prepare you for your rewrite.

Phase 3:

  • You will receive detailed annotations on your rewrite from David.
  • You will be provided a final telephone consultation to ensure your script is market-ready.
  • You will be given a professionally written logline, query letter & 25 FREE PITCHES on VPF.

Once you purchase, please email your script to [email protected]. Don’t miss out – spots will go fast!

TV Pilot (1/2 hour)

$1299
  • 1/2 Hour TV Pilot
  • 2 Months of Mentoring
  • 7-10 Pages of Detailed Notes
  • 3 Telephone Consultations
  • Detailed Annotations on Rewrites
  • Professionally Written Query Letter
  • 25 Free Pitches at VPF

Feature Film

$1899
  • Feature Film
  • 3 Months of Mentoring
  • 7-10 Pages of Detailed Notes
  • 3-5 Telephone Consultations
  • Detailed Annotations on Rewrites
  • Professionally Written Query Letter
  • 25 Free Pitches at VPF

TV Pilot (1 hour)

$2499
  • 1 Hour TV Pilot
  • 3 Months of Mentoring
  • 7-10 Pages of Detailed Notes
  • 3-5 Telephone Consultations
  • Detailed Annotations on Rewrites
  • Professionally Written Query Letter
  • 25 Free Pitches at VPF

Comprehensive Analysis + 10 Pitches – $299

The most common screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Indeed, when it comes to selling your project, you must have a professionally written, compelling script. But that’s not all. You also need ACCESS to Hollywood Pros – which is exactly why David devised this service – as it provides you with a comprehensive script analysis & 10 FREE PITCHES on Virtual Pitch Fest. David’s notes will be thorough & cover all aspects of your screenplay, including story/plot, characters, structure, dialogue, tone & marketability. You’ll also be given specific suggestions for improvement & answers to what David calls “The ScriptCoach Seven.” Additionally, you’ll be provided with a ScriptCoach Scorecard, which grades your script from top to bottom. Once you’ve purchased this package, please email your script whenever it’s ready to [email protected]. To receive your 10 FREE PITCHES, simply subscribe for free on VPF & they will be sent right away!

Turnaround time: 5-7 days





Comprehensive Analysis – $259

The #1 most common screenwriting mistake is sending out your script before it’s ready. Indeed, when it comes to selling your project, you must have a professionally written & compelling screenplay. And this popular service will get you there – as it provides you with comprehensive notes covering all aspects of your screenplay – including story/plot, characters, structure, dialogue, tone & marketability. You’ll also be given specific suggestions for the next draft & answers to what David calls “The ScriptCoach Seven.” Additionally, you’ll receive a ScriptCoach Scorecard, which grades your script from top to bottom. Once you’ve purchased this package, please email your script whenever it’s ready to [email protected].

Turnaround time: 5-7 days


Query Letter – $199

To get Hollywood Pros to read your script, you must first have a great query letter. David & his team have had years of proven experience creating professional query letters that are both compelling & persuasive. This is a terrific opportunity to have your script broken down clearly & concisely so that VIPs will request your material. Once you’ve purchased this service, please email your script in Final Draft or PDF to [email protected].

Turnaround time: 5-7 days